Love is someone who dreams of your smile,
And find that in your presence,
All the sleepless nights are worthwhile.
Love is walking in the sunshine,
Hand in hand.
Listening to him whisper,
You are mine.
Love is kissing under the twilight,
Staring up at the sky,
Never letting him out of my sight.
Love is someone who knows you are wrong,
But is willing to fight by your side,
And remind you to be strong.
Love is telling him,
In words of my own,
He's the most precious person,
That I've ever known.
Love is listening to him talk real slow,
Of memories which no one else know.
Love can be simple as a hug,
But as addictive as a drug.
If we just open our eyes wide,
Love has no place to hide.
I was touched by your poem. Well written.
ReplyDeleteThat's really romantic and I am looking forward for such person would exist in my life~
ReplyDeleteI really like the last 2 lines.
ReplyDeleteYou did such a great job on this poem. I hope you can find the guy who is as good as your poem.
ReplyDeleteI like your perspective of love. Let's keep our eyes open ;)
ReplyDelete-Suzanne L
As good as your normal blog, different from others. and i like your writting stule
ReplyDeleteI love your poem! It's the only one I've seen that rhymes so far! Great job on the comparison! It makes the poem very vivid and touching! I loved it :)
ReplyDeleteMike, u spelled STyLE wrong.
ReplyDeleteSooo nice. You even made them ryhme. Really a good poem. "Love has no place to hide"
ReplyDeleteGood poem ,i like the last two lines ...
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