Empty

Wandering, mindless, troublesome.
Seeing nothing but endless abyss.
Thoughts, come and go;
leaving the mind with a deathly blow.

Birds chirp and sing,
Winds scream and howl;
Yet all is lost within the empty hollow,
Leaving only pain and despair to follow.

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The speaker of this poem is a third person - the author (me) . Not the man in the picture.

The message of this poem is one of a depressive nature. The man the author is describing is in a state of depression as he sees nothing and thinks nothing. He hears the birds sing and winds howl but his mind is empty. He has recently gone through terrible tradgedy and is left with a troublesome mind.

The audience of this poem can be anyone, but because of the depresseive nature, it is more suitable for tennagers and adults. Younger children probably won't appreciate the message conveyed in the poem.

The two senses are hearing and sight.

Sean Bai edited this poem